Review! ⭐⭐/⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
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Before I get into the reasons for the low rating, I'd like to say what great potential @authormichelle.heron story has. Andre & Annie's tragic pasts and mutual attraction set the stage for a poignant story. Annie's wheelchair disability added diversity, and the novel followed a normal romance arc. .
Unfortunately, there were many technical mistakes: overuse of internal thoughts, no imagery or physical descriptions, misspellings, improper punctuation, and scripted dialogue. .
It wasn't until 1/2 way that Annie's disability was acknowledged and explained. Her and Andre's relationship was largely lust-based. Though it glorified sex as the end goal, their love scene seemed rushed, weak, and awkward. And when the very serious incident from Annie's past was revealed, the conflict that ensued resolved way too quickly, treating the sensitive subject matter rather lightly. .
I really wanted to enjoy this story, but Annie's damsel-in-distress syndrome and disability acting as a romantic ploy made it difficult for me. But the beautiful thing is that everyone's taste differs, and all of us, as writers, are on a journey. 💛🙏🏻 I wish the best for this tale. ♥️♥️♥️
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Go give the absolutely sweet author a follow!! >> @authormichelle.heron
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